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» Poem: Don't hurt me(COMMENTS PLZ)
Don't hurt me(COMMENTS PLZ)
written by mishy0077
08:41 AM 2/8/05
Hold my hand while I go through this
Let me feel the warmth of your kiss
Let me hold you close to me
Can't you see how happy we'd be?
You're allways telling me to be strong
What happens when I do something wrong?
What happens when I let it slip?
What happens when I take a trip?
Slap on the wrist? Chain to my arm?
Please tell me you wont do me harm
I love you more then I can say
I want you near me everyday
Don't ever hurt me, i know you love me
We can be happy, why can't you see?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
No emotion behind this one, thats why its shitty. lol. PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS

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» Comments / Feedback
by zver (2-8-2005 - 08:43 AM)
hi mischi i think i migh know u if u got to san mateo high then wow in other words ur poem was ummmm welll ok im not gna say shit on this one

by bipolor_princess (2-14-2005 - 10:42 AM)
i really like this poem

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