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Take me (COMMENTS PLZ)
written by mishy007708:45 AM 2/8/05Take my hand guide me well
Show me where love does dwell
Show me skies of deep blue
Show me why I love you
Show me how much you care
Love me here, love me there
I love you, you love me
That is all I can see |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Doesn't really make any sense to me, but awell. lol. PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS
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| » Comments / Feedback | by jamesFNbrowning (2-8-2005 - 08:51 AM)
| hey i think it makes sense... and i like it....but for somereason people like poems that make noo fcukn sense in the world. |
by HdHype (2-8-2005 - 08:55 AM)
by Lonely_Girl (2-8-2005 - 08:55 AM)
| *Nice Poem*....*Smile8*....*You are a good Writer* |
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