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It Seems Like(COMMENTS PLZ)
written by mishy007709:00 AM 2/8/05Nobody Cares I spend my nights crying
Nobody Cares inside I am dying
Sometimes it seems like that's what's going on
Even though I know that I'm very wrong
Nobody KNOWS I spend my nights crying
Nobody KNOWS inside I am dying
That's more real then the other shit
I'm being sucked into a bottomless pit
Of hurt and destruction. Of loss and pain
Sometimes I wonder if I'll ever be happy again |
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PLEASE COMMENT. This one has emotions behind it, but im not sure if its good, so please tell me
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| » Comments / Feedback | by jamesFNbrowning (2-8-2005 - 09:06 AM)
| it aint good emotion but i tell you this i'm sure you'll be happy again ...just dont do anything drastic...or rediculous you know? one life to live ....make it a good one |
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