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» Poem: OuR sTuPiD cRuSh...
OuR sTuPiD cRuSh...
written by NirvanaGirl23
04:07 PM 7/10/04
I thought everything was going right. I thought you were the one that would hold me tight.
I thought you were the one, to keep me sane.
but now i realized, i will never have someone to....
HoLd Me. or to. WaNt Me. or to. LoVe Me.
Cause your selfish and you want her so bad.
she brings you down. but you, are so blind.
You cannot see, what she does to you. and me.
My selfishness, it hurts me now. i cannot feel what i have felt. I want you now. you need me too.
you cannnot have me, even though i want you.
so as the day goes on, our love will fall apart.
this stupid crush that we have made will break our hearts and fall apart. It was all fake. it was not real. this stupid crush will bring Us DoWn....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Well, i wrote this when i just found out that a guy that i knew, was not coming to see me. instead he was going to his "new" girlfriends house, then to a party, and to watch fireworks. It really crushed me. He left without saying goodbye or anything. LEAVE A COMMENT!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by SuperBob (7-15-2004 - 03:10 AM)
thats a good poem..i liked it...nice and easy to follow...an i can kinda relate...but your footnote on it...i know what u mean...though i wasnt left for a new girl or so i was told...i was just forgotten about....

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