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» Poem: ruined my life
ruined my life
written by trulybroken57
03:41 AM 2/9/05
this pain has ruined my life,
i'm such a mess inside,
it's taking you away.
i cannot sort this out,
i'm falling apart,
peice by peice,
shard by shard,
hitting the unforgiving ground.
on the verge of tears
at every waking moment,
i can't go on like this.
it no longer hides my pain.
i'm in too deep,
i'm drowning in my blood,
i need someone to save me.
this is killing me inside,
ripping me to shreds.


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by RaddiSh22 (2-10-2005 - 11:20 PM)
i know what you mean. ur not alone, ok.

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