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» Poem: Left Behind
Left Behind
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
03:02 AM 2/10/05
A young boy can't control what's going on.
Not thinking about who he's hurting just knows these days are too long.
He does the only thing he thinks he can do,
kills himself leaving behind a family and a sad boy with no one to turn to.
A year later he falls in love with a beautiful girl,
making her the only thing in his world.
Together all the time, always ment to be,
but somehow this boy wasent happy.
A little later on, his father died.
Cody can do all he can not to cry.
A motorcycle accident leaves his fathers spirit high,
making the boy think all this God stuff is lies.
The man leaves behind his family including his son.
The boy acts happy, but missunderstood by everyone.
Cody has so much pain he thinks why not have more?
He cuts himself wondering, it can't be worse then before.
He may not be hurting inside,
but someone out there thinks of him and cries.
Wondering how he is does he need to talk is he fine?
What's he saying through those unspoken words, and silent mind?
If Cody lets go too, and no one caught the signs.
I'll be the one, being left behind.


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» Comments / Feedback
by unpure_substance (2-10-2005 - 03:11 AM)
more of a story then a poem

by zver (2-10-2005 - 05:59 AM)
omg get over it

by Cut_Wrist_Risk (2-10-2005 - 02:16 PM)
Zver cause I never cared to remember ur real name im calling you by this name. You dont even know what ur talking about...this has nothin to do with my dead friend so FUCK OFF. And if it did I could'nt simply get over it...it's barrely been a week. So since you have no emotions, quit making it seem like mine are so exagereated.

by XsouredXfaithX (2-11-2005 - 11:38 PM)
awesome poem cassy and thx for commenting on mine!! and im sorry if it is about your dead friend...it hurts when they go

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