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IT - part 2. (comments :) plz???)
written by mishy007707:44 AM 2/11/05Try to make IT sway
Try to make IT stay
Try to make IT come
Try to make IT some
Try to make IT cry
Try to make IT die
Try to make IT fun
Try to make IT run
Try to make IT free
Try to make IT see
Try to make IT rest
Try to make IT best
Try to make IT shy
Try to make IT fry
Try to make IT weak
Try to make IT freak |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
that started to get a bit weird (weirder) at the end. lol. It was my last poem fo the day so I decided to make it really wierd. lol. So yeah, please comment. lol. Cyaz all. *kiss*
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Jimmy_Lippstikk (2-11-2005 - 07:47 AM)
by Ruined_Hopes (2-11-2005 - 12:39 PM)
| again this "IT" seems to be something of yours or something you want. it may be your soul/spirit or i may be wrong. kool poem tho. |
by Imbeyondthelight (2-25-2005 - 03:42 PM)
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