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» Poem: i give up
i give up
written by suicide_penguin
06:34 PM 2/11/05
I give up on trying to be the best of them
I'd rather be just like the rest of them
Instead of 100 percent and giving my all best
I'd rather stay down whenever I fall
I give up on teamwork and working together
I'd rather stay inside than face the weather
Instead of a nice girl, so kind and polite
I'd rather do wrong I'm tiered of doing right
I give up on trying to keep my promise
I'd rather tell lies, its boring being honest
Instead of working hard and doing all I can
I'd rather hardly work, that's my new plan
I give up on my dream about marrying you
I'd rather just dream about burring you
I give up on everything, why can't you see
That it's only because you gave up on me.


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» Comments / Feedback
by Marigold (2-11-2005 - 06:42 PM)
hmmmm... Thats pretty good. Hope you don't really do that though.

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