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what's wrong with me?
written by trulybroken5711:44 PM 2/11/05my life has been degraded to nothing,
i waste my time staring blankly
at the empty space left inside,
why is nothing there?
filled with holes that will not fill,
every move i make hurts,
a deep, throbbing pain
like nothing ever felt before.
i cannot drag myself to do anything,
i have become a wasted space.
i close my eyes,
more lost now than i ever was,
i need a way out,
a way to clear my head,
to feel empty,
for the empitness is better
than all these thoughts racing through
my troubled mind.
i'm not all here,
i cannot concentrate,
i think i'm going crazy.
not making much sense, that's all i've become,
a lost waste of space.
i mean nothing to no one,
you're the only one who cares,
but if you knew, if only you knew,
would you still love me?
i'm so scared and alone,
my pain is hovering over me,
hiding me, pretending it's not there.
i'm so tired,
sleep is all i want to do.
what's wrong with me?
i'm screaming, bleeding, praying
that everything will go away,
for i don't know what's causing this,
what's wrong?
degraded into nothing.........
staring blankly..........
i'm losing everything.............. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont know what's wrong with me, i'm so tired and cold all the time, i dont know what is going on most of the time.......
i'm so lost........
please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AthiestAnarchist (2-11-2005 - 11:47 PM)
| I know how you feel, I've been going through a period such as this myself. It seems like someone or something left you that left you feeling empty and hurt and you seem to be very sad. Very good poem..I loved it. |
by (guest) (2-11-2005 - 11:56 PM)
| nice poem. .. sometimes i feel the same.... is this true bout ur feeling? |
by trulybroken57 (2-12-2005 - 12:01 AM)
| what do u mean about feeling? if u mean empty, yes it is better than other things |
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