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» Poem: erased
erased
written by trulybroken57
11:37 PM 2/13/05
i've been erased,
surrounded by bitter mourning,
withering away, i'm being replaced
by shadows filled with hate.
counting my tears, one by one
as they fall, fading into nothing,
a whisper in the dark
is all i hear tonight.
i am slowly learning,
learning to say goodbye to yesterday,
soothing my mind with lies
all alone, i don't believe.
i am trying, i am crying,
watching as chances fade away,
melting....
slipping.....
the dust of me is lost,
erased in time,
nothing is left.
they have all forgotten me,
saw me silently slip away,
heard my screams,
but still they will never know
how it really feels
to be replaced
with such an awkward moment in time,
a stolen, black shadow
of unseen promises and lies,
it's just easier to erase
every thought clouding the sky,
cluttering your path with misery,
so easy to erase..........


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by RaddiSh22 (2-14-2005 - 09:13 PM)
it makes sense

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