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» Poem: Love
Love
written by fuzzypunkhat
11:07 PM 2/14/05
You asked me today,"Would you love me if I cheated on you?"
I replied,"No."
You asked me today,"Would you love me if I stayed with you as long as I could?"
I replied,"No..."
You asked me today,"If I left you, would you hate me?"
I answered,"No..."
So you got up and left me,
But I stood behind you,
"I would be upset if you cheated on me because I couldn't give you what you wanted, I wouldn't want it to be through."
"As long as you could wouldn't be long enough, because I think of you day and night."
"If you left me, I'd follow you for the rest of my life."

Love is when I can't get you off my mind,
Because I'm so occupied,
Thinking of you makes me blind,
You can never ever be late,
Because you're my best date,
Can't you see that this is fate?

I love you so much that it hurts so bad,
That you used me and made me sad,
You're like my best wish I could never have,
I'm so lost in my confusion now that you're gone,
When I'm sitting up from 10 pm in my bed straight to dawn,
I'm just upset things went wrong.

I can't focus in school because you're in my thoughts,
All the sadness yet all the joy you brought,
I gave my heart to you, I was simply caught,
Only to let you step on it but if only,
I wasn't so lonely,
Cold and holy...

I could think off the things above,
And send my heart to you without a shove,
Or a shout and reply,"My heart is yours..."
It may be broken, but this is love.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I like this guy whom is 17, going on 18... And he basically used me. He flirted with me, I'm a softy for puppy love... and I see him doin the same shit with other girls -Sigh-... Oh well :( I've been thinking about him for two weeks straight.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (2-14-2005 - 11:52 PM)
totally how i feel. I was going out with this guy and we got really close then all of a sudden he dumped me without any explanation or anything. Now I'm not over him and he has a new g/f. Happy V-Day to me

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