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The bloody forgiveness
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk10:26 PM 2/15/05Father forgive me,
for I have sinnned.
I have hurt so many,
and killed myself within.
The bloody massacre,
reamins in my mind.
I remember the blood and gore,
of all man kind.
I took all of them out,
stabbing one by one.
I contemplate the shouts,
of your dying sons.
But one of them surrvived,
for I had to let him go!
He was the reason for all of their cries,
so my love I could show.
I attempted other ways,
to show my affection.
But my love it didn't show,
more then this conception.
Taking ones life,
to win someones heart.
May build up some fright,
but it's really not that hard.
When you are in love,
as I am,
there's no word called enough,
and no way to understand.
Now how does my love one feel you ask?
After what I did,
my gruesome task.
He thinks it's sick.
So I'll mend the peices back together,
forgive me Father I have sinned,
but please take care of my lover.
In your holy name,
Amen! |
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Cody :)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-15-2005 - 10:53 PM)
| its mary hehehe i really like this poem cassy!!! its one of your best poems that u have written! i like how its like a prayer that nifty. AMEN! yes, i really like it. YOU NEED TO GET IT PUBLISHED!!!!!!!!!! seriously go on google and find a place where u can get it published! its really good cassy! id print it out for u, actually id print all of them out for you but i have no ink right now. perhaps next time i get ink i will. im glad u finally told cody how u feel. hopefully everything works out with u n him. and hopefully dillon will realize that u do care about him. im sure in time both of their lives will get better. i think they both just need to realize that u care about them and want to help them out. but yeah good poem i like that parts where it says fogive me father i have sinned. also i like how its like a metaphor for how much u love cody thats pretty nifty. u should make a book of your poems that would be pretty kool. hope u kno i care about u cassy. but yeah ill ttyl homie. KEEP WRITTIN KICK ASS POETRY!!! :-D love you lots *~Mary~* |
by silent_tears09 (2-15-2005 - 11:12 PM)
| omgsh! its an awesum poem !!!! i LOVE it!! |
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