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» Poem: bring me back down
bring me back down
written by trulybroken57
03:52 PM 2/19/05
so high,
floating above myself,
i can't feel anymore.
hovering between dreams and my reality,
i'm so alone, unreachable.
concentration is beyond me,
i need someone,
someone to bring me back down,
down........
back down to reality
as drops of my dreams
fall deeper into the ocean,
freezing moments in time,
keeping me high,
high above the lies,
above the tears of mournful sorrow
all these children cry.
bring me down,
let me touch reality once more.
beyond your grasping reach,
i'm standing on a higher cloud,
so high,
so out of touch,
please bring me back down,
again and again........
come save me


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i'm so out of it, i dont know......
please comment

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by no_dominion (2-19-2005 - 04:06 PM)
Very good poem!

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