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» Poem: softly slip away
softly slip away
written by trulybroken57
03:58 PM 2/19/05
i'm on the edge,
so close to breaking down,
scared of what i might do,
i need you,
yet no one's there,
all alone, fearful thoughts
creep inside my mind,
leaving me used and exhausted,
i'm so sorry,
nothing is worth this,
this pain i cause to everyone-
just let me go,
let me drift away,
i nevr want to hurt you,
just forget,
come dry my tears,
and gently let me slip away,
i've fought so hard,
but everything was worthless,
i lost to the hateful misery
burning deep inside of me.
i need you now,
here to soothe my soul,
just hold me
as i softly slip away,
let sweet, gentle whispers
slowly carry me
away from this tortured reality.
i need you
to just let me slip away.....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
dont worry, last night was just a really bad night. it's ok
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» Comments / Feedback
by no_dominion (2-19-2005 - 04:05 PM)
Its an amazing poem that i can relate to. your talented! Em x

by suicide-fairie (2-19-2005 - 06:49 PM)
nice work! i kan relate to that :D XxX

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