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"My Fatal Goodbye"
written by XxXstitchesXxX01:59 AM 2/24/05All thats left is the pain,
the poison running through my vains.
Leaving behind me, my past,
As I start to fade fast.
Now I lay here crying,
only knowing that Im dying.
Im seeing stars in my head,
thinking now that Im am dead.
Im trying to believe,
but the thoughts I slowly recieve.
My breathing starts to slow,
knowing now Im letting go.
All of the pain I hold inside,
my death was all I had to hide.
The tears now leaving my eyes,
this is my fatal goodbye. |
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~I think its good!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-24-2005 - 03:02 AM)
| I also thought it was good. you drive (write) very well of suicide :xpaperdollx: |
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