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» Poem: take them all away
take them all away
written by trulybroken57
09:26 PM 2/24/05
depressed and morbid,
nothing to look forward to
but months of
prying, irritating questions
just to see how crazy i am.
finally deciding how lost i am,
how messed up i've become
after weeks of painful, fearful
memories forever engraved in me,
i am unhappy; depressed,
without a reason.......
come take this away........
these drugs of engineered happiness,
they won't make me smile,
the only thing to help me
is you...
and yet the questions continue,
i am constantly tired,
sleep hardly comes anymore,
for i am so worried, so afraid......
i don't want to change,
i hate them all,
no one cares if i live or die,
i have nothing,
only you......
no drugs can make me real again,
just come and take them away....
let me be........
exhausted an shaking everytime,
this can't be helping me,
i dread each coming week,
for it just brings more tears,
more gnawing, empty questions,
just make them go away,
tell me you are here,
please calm me, protect me,
don't let them take me away......


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i HATE THEM ALL!!!!!!!!!!!! my parents, the phsyco docters, the happy pills, the stupid, nosy questions, i'm about to SCREAM!!!!!!! just take them all away!!!!!!!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by painfull-secrets (2-24-2005 - 09:28 PM)
nice, I feel the same way. I love how you express your feelings and put them in words.

by gothic_angel_44 (2-24-2005 - 11:39 PM)
i know wat u feel i went thro it to hang in there

by gone_22 (2-25-2005 - 08:38 PM)
you're going 2 get through this ok. trust me, me and tommy will always be there for you. and teresa has helped me alot so far, so if u ever want 2 tell her anything, she WILL listen.

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