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» Poem: My suicide (Please read!)
My suicide (Please read!)
written by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx
04:16 AM 2/25/05
My suicide
You may wonder what happened

Somehow it seems selfish
Understand my story, then
I will respect you
Can I start over?
Indefinite descisions
Desecrating God's temple
Eternal hellfire for me


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I know you have heard this before, but I think suicide is extremely selfish. I can't speak for everyone, since i don't know what everyone's trials and tribulations in life has been, but I can say that I strongly would recommend that you reconsider. Rejoice in the physical presence God has given you for this short time before you destroy it! Besides, think of all of the people with disabilities that would give anything for a fully functional body.

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» Comments / Feedback
by xXxXwristfullofscarsXxXx (2-25-2005 - 04:39 AM)
I absolutely agree that suicide is selfish. I think it is a way to make people feel sorry for you and get their sympathy, and a poor way at that.

by theXrecluse (2-27-2005 - 08:33 AM)
interesting that you say suicide is selfish and i cant agree more your poems seem dark yet you bring God into your footnotes... interesting is all i have to say not that you care becuz who am i anyway...

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