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"Deadly Fume"
written by XxXstitchesXxX01:25 AM 2/26/05As I sit on the floor in my room,
I hold a deadly fume.
I think about my fucked up past,
and wonder when I light this fume, how long it will last.
I want to die, I have no more hope,
If this fume doesnt work, Ill use my rope.
I have no reason to live,
from all the love, no one would ever give.
I shall take this lighted match,
and on the fume I shall latch.(it)
I pray that my life is almost to its end.
I shall this this earth...I shall leave you my only friend. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-26-2005 - 01:39 AM)
| Good message, work on your structure. I would also like something more morbid. Jus keep workin at it |
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