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» Poem: I'm Waiting
I'm Waiting
written by SuperBob
02:10 AM 7/17/04
Here I am to ask the questions
I am ready to find out if you read it all
I need to know what is going on now
Will you just tell me what went wrong?

Did we get lost somewhere in communication?
Was it something I did that threw you off?
I'm sorry if anything I did made you fear
But now please let me know

I gave you two options
Either you were true with your words
Or, you lied to me in the process of manipulation
Which one was it Sweetheart?

I said you would be on my killing list
That is if the second choice you choose
I said that we could make this work
If the first choice makes things right


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
so much writing on this one stupid guy...damnit why am i affected?...i always told myself i wasnt...why couldnt that have been true?....but fuck...i dont want to lose him...he isnt just one stupid guy...he is just one amazing guy...my guy...in heart is him

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