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"Imaginary World" (plz coment if u like)
written by XxXstitchesXxX02:25 AM 2/27/05What I hold in my hand,
I what takes me away to my own land.
My blade that gives me all this pain,
its like loving the beat of the rain.
To stroke it slighty down my arm,
its like I dont even know it causes me this much harm.
This to me is my best friend,
knowing with my blade, my life could come to an end.
I always say I want to die,
but really I lie.
I do hate my life, and I do cut,
and I do this because all my life its been a black hole and a door shut.
All I wish for is people to talk to,
and for them to not make it up, for them to be true. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by ForEverLonley (2-27-2005 - 02:30 AM)
| again, amazing poem, keep it up |
by XxXstitchesXxX (2-27-2005 - 02:38 AM)
| Audrie, you have never had your dad say the shit mine says to me or your parents have never been divoreced....DONT SAY THAT...THE REASONS I WRITE POEMS IT TO EXPRESS MY FUCKIN FEELINGS |
by XxShadowKittixX (2-27-2005 - 02:40 AM)
| i dont care about your crap... i do understand... you are the one who doesn't...so you can just keep deleting my comments but i dont care...so you can just take my understandment and shove it up your chunky ass.! |
by sweetiepie89 (2-27-2005 - 02:40 AM)
| that was a really, really good poem......keep up the good work
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by ForEverLonley (2-27-2005 - 02:43 AM)
| tell the fucker to shut up, ur poems are fucking amazing! |
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (2-27-2005 - 02:44 AM)
| This poem really makes you stop and think about how fragile life really is... I love this poem. |
by XxXstitchesXxX (2-27-2005 - 02:44 AM)
| fuck off audrie u dont understand....has your dad ever left you? has your dad ever told you that your not his daughter no more...has your dad ever asked you if you call ur moms boyfriend dad? has your dad ever told you that if your mom takes him to court that he wont ever let us see him again....I DONT THINK SO!.....SO FUCK OFF.....WHY THE FUCK DO YOU WANNA START SHIT WITH ME? |
by XxXstitchesXxX (2-27-2005 - 02:47 AM)
| thank you foreverloney ...thank you so fuckin much...she needs to...b/c she has no fuckin clue wut im going thro...(shes my cousin) |
by XxShadowKittixX (2-27-2005 - 02:50 AM)
| u wanna fuckin tell me this shit you all need to fuckin fuck off... i didnt even do any thing to any of yall i do understant it is you all who don't so fuck off you fuckin idiotz...! you can all just kiss my fucken ass...you all don't know her...she is my cousin...so don't fuckin tell me to fuck off okay!!!... |
by XxXstitchesXxX (2-27-2005 - 02:56 AM)
| they can say wut ever the fuck they want....its you who didnt answer all my questions....like did your dad ever tell you that u werent his daughter....?????? hu?.....and....I can write bout wtf i wanna write bout....so URE the one that needs to FUCK OFF |
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