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Slipping Away
written by Tainted_Soul_777
03:26 AM 2/27/05
I fall.....

So fast please catch me

All I wanted....

Was for you to have the best of me

Please dont say that it is over

This happend way too fast

I thought there was alil hope for it to maybe last.
Im in so deep right now
I cant even see the light
Im calling out to everyone who knows to always be in the night
Its Slip....
Slip....
Slipping......
Away.
All I wanted was a sunny day
All I ever got was rain
Black Clouds hover over my shoulder
I try to think of being in your arms, but it only gets colder.
I close my eyes
And tears fall
Im so blind I couldnt read the writings on the wall
I dont know what else to say to you
To make your pain go away
I walk in to a pitch black room and see your body as it lays
Hes killed you with love
The only good thing left in this life
I ask God up above
Why this sacrafice?
I think that youre still listening, if youre even out there
I dont even know if you really accually care.
Doesnt seem like some times
But well never know why
We'll never know if theres even a reason I still have faith
When it would be worth it to just die
But....
Dont.....
Let......
Go.......
Cause we only have ourselves
And it we give that up
We'll have nothing else.
Because it just keeps on.....
....Slipping


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by floggingfelix (2-27-2005 - 03:38 AM)
deep man, real deep. i luved it, plz write more :)

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