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"Dad, I still Love you" (plz comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX
08:39 AM 2/27/05
Sometimes really late at night,
I dream of things that give me the fright.
You loved me there when our family was together,
now your love for me has teathered.
I still love you no matter what.
even though because of you I cut.
Its the only thing that can cause me pain,
to take my mind off the hurt you rained.
I dont know what I did,
for you to throw me out like this because I am just a kid.
You disowned my from your life,
just like you did your ex-wife.
I still love you,
and that will atleast always be true.


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» Comments / Feedback
by LonelySeptember (2-27-2005 - 08:41 AM)
That was awesome and I can totally relate.

by Lonely_Girl (2-27-2005 - 08:44 AM)
*Love It, Love It, Love It*....*I hope that isn't the way you feel*....*If it is, I'm Sorry*....*Smile*

by trilee (2-27-2005 - 08:05 PM)
hey. keep it going strong. i know how you feel. i did the same thing when my dad left me to. i now know that someone else used the cut as i did as a pain releaver. so just keep you head held high and and rember your not the only one in that big only sky -trilee- ***SMILE***

by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 12:42 AM)
hey im glad that you can express your feelings.. mine is kinda similar.

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