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Life(freakin comment)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk09:46 PM 2/27/05I've seen the things you thought were bad.
I've been through stuff you never have.
I've wept so loud, through silent tears.
I've faced everyone of my fears.
I've let go of many things.
I've delt with what my life brings.
I've hurt so many including myself.
I've shared secrets I shoulden't tell.
I've witnessed heart break and went through it as well.
I've cried alone, when no one cared how I felt.
I've went through pain, and still do all the time.
I've hated life but still hang on to mine. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-27-2005 - 10:33 PM)
| mary also says really good!!! love it awesome! oh yah! lol this is a great poem. stay black cassy...lmao |
by (guest) (2-27-2005 - 11:40 PM)
by XxMeTaLsMiSsTreSSxX (2-28-2005 - 12:29 AM)
| I REALLY LIKED THAT POEM I CAN SO RELATE
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by Suicidal_Amber (2-28-2005 - 02:08 AM)
| Very repetitive. - Amber - |
by LostSoul013 (2-28-2005 - 09:32 AM)
| It's an awsome poem. I really like it |
by (guest) (3-2-2005 - 07:08 PM)
| That was nice that sounds about like my life but hang in there it'll get better... |
by sophie vavasseur fan (3-4-2005 - 05:46 PM)
by (guest) (3-4-2005 - 09:30 PM)
| just judging from this poem, u and me have alot in common...just hang on...hopefully for your and my sake things will get better....:) -er!cka |
by dancingrooster08 (3-4-2005 - 10:19 PM)
| I love it. Good, great job.
erika. |
by (guest) (3-5-2005 - 11:10 AM)
| :O Wow. You're awesome!
You should join www.allpoetry.com and get more feedback on your stuff, you kick @$$!! :) |
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