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Kill for love! (AWESOME!)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk09:55 PM 2/27/05Do you mind if I kill you softly?
While whispering in your ear.
The things I did that were naughty,
just loud enough for you to hear.
I've murdered you girlfriend.
The one who took you away.
I watched her suffer to the end,
and wished her pain would stay.
I stabbed and watched her bleed.
Gasping for survival.
She fell to her knees,
in time for your arrival.
I coulden't help but notice,
a tear in your eye.
It's not that bad now is it?
It's just one pathetic life.
I did this for you and me.
Don't tell me no!
I love you Cody!
Not when you fight back though!
Don't run away!
You can never tell a soul.
It doesn't have to be this way.
I can get rough you know!
I did what I must do,
to save myself then and there.
I took not one life, but two!
Getting caught I coulden't bare.
And when there was the funeral.
It was a rainy day.
There he was at the burial,
looking at MY grave. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I killed sum1 to be w/ cody...then killed myself.
hehehe
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-27-2005 - 10:30 PM)
| mary says this is a nifty poem. very good buddy! oh yeah! thats fricken awesome! oh yah! love u |
by xxxvampire_loverxxx (2-28-2005 - 12:45 AM)
by brokenxsmile (2-28-2005 - 01:48 AM)
| wow! That's a really really really good poem!!! xoxo |
by potty_dark_wiccan (2-28-2005 - 11:56 AM)
| wow, psycho... I like that ;) |
by -_Andnothinelse_- (3-1-2005 - 01:18 AM)
| i like it , you did a good job here, i have a few like this. well written. |
by AngelWildcat (3-1-2005 - 05:56 PM)
| This is the greatest poem! I also have my share of peoms like this. And that beginning sounds JUST LIKE how I would start some of my poems. |
by (guest) (3-2-2005 - 03:08 AM)
| wow..this is a great poem but please dont tell me you really killed someone!! |
by (guest) (3-3-2005 - 04:57 PM)
| dang...good job cassy..btw its XsouredXfaithX..a.k.a jess good job tho!! keep up the good work |
by amndfyblckore15 (3-3-2005 - 08:14 PM)
by Xguitar_pick_freakX (3-3-2005 - 10:28 PM)
| dandy dandy dandy.....pop tart for you
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