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"You've Won" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX01:15 AM 2/28/05I hope you know you have won,
soon I will be gone with and my life will be done.
I hate you, dont you see.
all you did was hurt the inside of me.
A diguise is what I wear,
so people think Im happy and my life is fair.
But when Im locked in my room,
Im the only one that sees my misery and doom.
I dont let people see me cry,
I dont let people know that I wish and pray to die.
I hide my scars under my clothes,
I know that no one cares, so my scars I dont show.
Soon my life will be over with and done,
I just hope you know you won. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by gothic_angel_44 (2-28-2005 - 01:18 AM)
| AWSOME thats all i have to say is AWSOME |
by DNR666 (2-28-2005 - 01:19 AM)
| interesting. blunt. good work |
by DNR666 (2-28-2005 - 01:19 AM)
| interesting. blunt. good work |
by ForEverLonley (2-28-2005 - 01:52 AM)
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