» Poem: Rain (Inspired by "Stan" by Eminem) |
Rain (Inspired by "Stan" by Eminem)
written by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx06:56 AM 2/28/05I'm cold
Someone keep me warm
I'm lonely
My life on the streets has gotten old
No place to call home
Food's gone cold
Pins and needles fall on me
I look up wondering why
Alone
Never took a stand
Grew up
Childhood passed too fast
Parents died
No close family
No friends
I am leaving this shithole
You never cared |
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Not following the song that closely, but I just thought this up when listening to it. [ View xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 356 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by a_grey_deaths_heart (2-28-2005 - 06:59 AM)
*claps* *whistles*.....wooooo.......lol that was a very very pretty one....maybe my fav from u..but im not quite shure yet... |
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