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A reflection (please comment)
written by mishy007711:11 AM 2/28/05There's a girl sitting in the rain all alone, crying
She wont say a thing, she looks like she's dying
What's going through her mind? What does she see?
Is she trying to be something she never, ever will be?
Does she cut herself, and drink her blood, like me?
Does she want to see things, she'll never see?
Does she want to get his promised approval just once?
Is she sick of tagging along, of being just a dunce?
Does she cry out at night and scream when alone?
Does she spend ours with him, mainly, on the phone?
Does she wish he'd love her, like she loves him?
Does she wish the light inside her, wasn't so dim?
Does she get sick of the sleepless, horrid nights?
Is she sick of getting into deep, emotional fights?
Is she sick of hiding her feelings from everyone around?
Is she getting sick of always being pushed to the ground?
Does she need someone to talk to, but wont accept it?
Does she feel as if shes falling into a bottomless pit?
Who is she? What does she want? Where does she go?
How much about her can we possibly hope to know?
Where is her heart at? Is she even human at all?
Who will be there to catch her when she does fall?
Will she ever trust anyone? Or will she always hate?
If she keeps going this way, she'll never find her soul mate...
Who is this girl? Now I can see
This girl alone, is no one but me |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
PLEASE COMMENT? Just what I see when I look into the mirror, or maybe a perception of what others may think, im not sure. No one really knows what I'm like because I hide my feelings so well, but Rory can see through the barrier. Thats why I love him. PLEASE COMMENT? I want to know what you think.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-28-2005 - 07:14 PM)
| go fucking kill yourself bitch. |
by mishy0077 (3-3-2005 - 12:55 PM)
| dont tempt me. lol. I've tried, |
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