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"You've Won" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX11:27 PM 2/28/05I hope you know you have won,
soon I will be gone with and my life will be done.
I hate you, dont you see.
all you did was hurt the inside of me.
A diguise is what I wear,
so people think Im happy and my life is fair.
But when Im locked in my room,
Im the only one that sees my misery and doom.
I dont let people see me cry,
I dont let people know that I wish and pray to die.
I hide my scars under my clothes,
I know that no one cares, so my scars I dont show.
Soon my life will be over with and done,
I just hope you know you won. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by razorbladekittie (2-28-2005 - 11:36 PM)
| nice, my style, just so you know I have a poem inspired by your name, not copieing it or anything k? I hope you are alright, you use beautiful words... |
by XxBrOkeNSmiLe7xX (2-28-2005 - 11:40 PM)
| i wanna thank u for wut u said thats pretty sad that u cut if u wanna AIM me to talk my sn is hollar2yaget1 or brok3n til death THANK U hope to hear from u soon !! kassy |
by BulimicRainbow (3-1-2005 - 12:26 AM)
| This is really nice.. I like it alot |
by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 12:48 AM)
| coooool, about the poem, you know, Because of him poem!! Wow painful? Dude are you like okay? |
by XxXstitchesXxX (3-1-2005 - 01:01 AM)
| dude, yea...but I have feelings to...and my dad should kno....and this is rele how I feel...and I hate it |
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