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"Why did You Go?" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX03:19 AM 3/1/05How many times do I have to tell you,
I hate you, you were never true.
Your like a stranger to me,
its like I dont know you, cant you see?
Your a father that I never had,
a dad I longed to love.
I have no more feelings for a piece of dirt on the floor,
because when you left the anger I thought about more and more.
You left me standing there with a picture in the pooring rain,
and all I felt a pain.
I wanted to run after you and tell you to wait,
but that was my fate.
I now cry myself to sleep some nights thinking about how much I wanted to be like my dad,
and now Im relieved I didnt make that choice, it was bad.
Feeling sorry about my past,
knowing I couldnt make my family last.
And now a time goes on,
I worry about me being gone.
I've tried over and over to die,
but somehow god doesnt want me to try.
I want to kill myself all because of the hurt you gave me,
and knowing I will never me free. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-1-2005 - 04:16 AM)
| I was really moved by the poem. Tragic, but beautiful. Listening to "Stranger on the Shore" (one of the few old-fashioned songs i like) really helps me get in the mindset to read these poems. Just a random thought. |
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-1-2005 - 04:18 AM)
| I was really moved by the poem. Tragic, but beautiful. Listening to "Stranger on the Shore" by Acker Bilk (one of the few old-fashioned songs i like) really helps me get in the mindset to read these poems. Just a random thought. |
by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 05:19 AM)
| hey dont feel bad i dont loke my dad either you should want to be like someone you should be your own person |
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