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What is this word?
written by GeishaGirl06:31 AM 3/1/05What is this world we've built? Kids getting blind drunk, coming to school stoned out of their naive minds. Choking on vomit, getting their stomach’s pumped all this at a mere age of 13. Still a baby why? Where are their parents? Daddy locked away in prison probably not even aware his child's existence. Mummy in rehab trying to rid a habit, probably forgot she even had a child. SHIT WHAT IS WRONG?!
Where are they?
What is this world we've built? Help me comprehend it. I don't even know how to take it anymore. But I guess I have to swallow it deep and keep walking, keep my fucking opinionated mouth closed tight like a nun's legs. Knock out my teeth make me look like a French prostitute. Thanks. Fuck just rip out my vocal chords, pathetic cowards, just be done with it. I have more balls than you all! |
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» Comments / Feedback | by LaDiablo (3-1-2005 - 07:13 AM)
YAY!! Originality wins! Nice use of words, very strong without seeming overdone ^_^. 'Closed tight like a nun's legs...' XD that's friggin awesome! |
by Genocide Reaper (3-1-2005 - 07:21 AM)
Iv often wondered the same myself.. Bravo. |
by GeishaGirl (3-1-2005 - 08:11 AM)
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