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» Poem: *You* (pretty bad, plz comment)
*You* (pretty bad, plz comment)
written by mishy0077
11:57 AM 3/1/05
It brightens my day just to see you smile
But that happiness only lasts a little while
I hate this feeling because it hurts deep down
I feel only sadness when your not around
But when we get together, im floating on air
No matter how I feel, you always seem to care
I can't believe you've stuck by me all this way
I'm sure I would have given up on me any day
The fact that you're willing to walk miles for me
Lets me know, you love me, I love you, you can see


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
pretty bad, i think, just got really bored. Today I kissed Rory for the first time. It was my first kiss, so I'm certain it was the worst kiss ever for him. lol. Awell, he loves me.... I think. lol. PLEASE COMMENT

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