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you said (plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me08:24 PM 3/1/05you said we wouldnt fall apart
you said it would last forever
you said you would never do this to me,but you lied
you hit me,but why?
im trapped in this thing called love
but someone help me out!
you said we were the best ever
you wrapped me around your fingers with string and pulled me in
you lied
you hurt me
you said everything good,you made me happy
but now its gone the oppisite direction.... |
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i feel this right now....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Deathcrush (3-1-2005 - 10:55 PM)
| if anyone touched me, i would beat there ass
this poem makes me angry and sadisic, but in a good way, you seem to be dealing with alot i hoipe you have some sort of veting this
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by black_heart_emo_girl (3-2-2005 - 05:33 PM)
| awwww....i feel your pain. i feel so sorry for you. it's really good tho. luv your stuff. truly amazing. a/s/l? |
by koolgurlhere (4-1-2005 - 05:06 PM)
| this has hapend 2 me b4....its great... |
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