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Prince of flames (plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me08:58 PM 3/1/05The forest so dark the moon my only guide
I walk fast as my eyes lurk side to side
please get me home..home I pray
for this darkness makes my heart stray...
Out of no where I see raging flames
sweeping the forest yet they're are so tame
I turn around to flee this trap of death
but the flame conquers my every path
standing in the middle encircled by flames
fear grips my thought making me lame
this flame is so close yet does not burn me
I try to scream but my voice..it flees
Clutching myself tight I see the flame walk
it fills me with awe to see the flame...walk
out of the flames appears a...a...prince
he is so divine..so exquisite...a prince
My eyes widen as his hand penetrates my body
touching...roaming...enticing lustful agony
with the other hand he wraps around my waist
pulls me close begins to kiss...nibble and taste
Rapt by his actions and wanton desire
my body slowly begins to produce fire
his scorching love greets between my thighs
so warm...such heat cannot even sigh
As our lips crushes this prince takes his claim
our passion erupts producing more flames
an undeniable euphoria rages through the forest
evoking sparks of demands without rest
This forest is not so dark anymore
for the flames of passion rages forever more
I do not pray to get home...home safely
for my prince burns my body passionately |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 09:55 PM)
by Deathcrush (3-1-2005 - 10:32 PM)
| i really liked this one, it was nicely written also
you have some talent for writing you use good words phrases among other things so i hope you continue you have a wakeing talent in you that will rage out one day i can see it :) |
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