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» Poem: death who?(comment plz)
death who?(comment plz)
written by darkness_follows_me
09:01 PM 3/1/05
My boyfriend thinks I'm crazy, I just dont see it though
He says I'm bad, but it's not like he knows everything I do
I get up in the morning and go about my day
I don't do much, and there's not a lot I say.
I come home to a dirty house, another empty fridge
I don't get how we make it, it isn't a way to live.
Last night he made me mad, so I covered him up
I was tired of how quiet he was becoming so I told him i had enough.
Sometimes he sits and stares at me, watches me
I try to look away, but his eyes are all I see.
Maybe he's trying to get on my nerves, get into my mind
Maybe he's upset because he feels I left him behind.
It's not like we talk like normal people, we just sit and try to understand
but sometimes it gets so hard, I get mad again.
Again I cover him up, so he can look through the sheet.
Out into the nothing, I wonder what he sees?
I've always wondered if he can hear me when I say his name
but if he does he only shuts..me out of his brain.
I never meant to do it, I really did love him I'm sure you know.
But there's only so much someone can do, only so far they can go.
Now I have him the way i want him, quiet and content
Sometimes I almost forget...that my boyfriend's dead.


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» Comments / Feedback
by m.nizzle (3-1-2005 - 09:45 PM)
omg...wait...what really happened to your boyfriend?

by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 09:54 PM)
Ur poem touches me, my friend is in this situation.

by Deathcrush (3-1-2005 - 10:22 PM)
it is a good poem keep on writing i see talent in you yet

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