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What part did I fall in love with?
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
03:36 AM 3/2/05
Im hurting far too much to take my anger out.
It's pretty sad that with pain I have my doubts.
I cant do anything without you comming to mind.
You were so unique, deffinantly one of a kind.
With your thick brown hair and dark eyes as well.
A funny sense of humor, and how you caught me when I fell.
I would've done anything to be with the person you used to be.
The person who cared, and ackhnowledged me.
The one who I spent all my time thinking of.
The one I would of gave everything to including my love.
And now the only way to have you back is to let go of someone real.
The person who doesn't hide behind lies and says how she feels.
She admitted to you even after you hurt her.
That she had feelings still, but you didn't care.
So if thats the only way to have you back is by practically pushing her away.
Then I dont know what part of you I fell in love with anyway?


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by AntichristGhoul666 (3-2-2005 - 03:55 AM)
This is a nice piece of work, keep writing.

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