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again and again(comment plz)
written by darkness_follows_me08:48 PM 3/2/05I feel so god damn alone,
I cut so deep I hit the bone.
The blood is red and beautiful,
oddly enough, I feel so peaceful.
I have tear stains on my face,
I may be bleeding, but I'll do it with grace.
My heart is beating out of my chest,
tonight I will put myself to the test.
So many thoughts running through my mind,
I hate this mask I hide behind.
Why do I hate life so much?
The only thing keeping me here is your touch.
Over the old red cuts I trace,
this is me putting myself in my place.
Because the thoughts that I have of death,
cause me to sometimes not catch my breath.
I have dreams of blood and guts,
falling out of my deep cuts.
I do this because I don't know what else to do,
I promise, I don't do this because of you.
I do this so I can see,
all the anger and sadness inside of me.
You have no idea how much internal pain,
you need to do this again and again. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by leeannasis (3-2-2005 - 10:15 PM)
by Deathcrush (3-2-2005 - 10:17 PM)
| i understand your cuts, they are as a painting what you feal on the inside on the outside i to know this painting but i know also it does not show even half of what lies beneath |
by (guest) (3-4-2005 - 06:08 PM)
| just because
you break somehting
into lines doesn't
mean
it's poetry.
p.s. grow up and quit with the emo crap |
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