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"Because of My Dad" (please comment)lol
written by XxXstitchesXxX11:33 PM 3/2/05Ive taken the blade to my vain,
I only did it for the agony and suffering pain.
I want to die because of him,
I want to cry because of him.
I have only minutes left on this earth,
and I have no clue what its worth.
Ive been in this position to many years,
and the only thing I have to show from it is my fears.
I want to cry because of him,
I want to die because of him.
Im taking my life because of my dad,
he was nothing I ever had.
My wish to have a dad that cared about me,
will never come true because my soul is about to be set free.
Goodbye to those who cared,
thanks for the love that you shared |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by drowningkitten14 (3-2-2005 - 11:38 PM)
| this is veryyyy good! but whos "him"? |
by heartbrokenbabii (3-2-2005 - 11:41 PM)
by Suicidal_Amber (3-2-2005 - 11:54 PM)
| Great job, I can really tell how your feeling through this poem. - Amber - |
by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 01:17 AM)
| for a person that hates people like myself you sure do want some comments but ur poems rock and i love you.........lol |
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