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i will (comment plz)
written by darkness_follows_me05:32 PM 3/3/05When the sunset
dilutes itself in the soothing
earth of your eyes
and the green
falls to loam.
When the dew
like tiny constellations
glistens in silken webs
and sleeping spiders.
When the last sorrows
are forgotten among
the black foliage
of nameless melancholy-
gray that feels pink.
I will, but don't
ask me until the time
comes.
I'll remember when
fatigue quakes in the
muscles of your mistakes
of memory; don't
rush the moonrise,
don't question
my will, it happens
always when I will
the wrong time right,
and the passion fades
from the planet's sight. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fyrefoxx516 (3-3-2005 - 07:05 PM)
| that was an amazing poem--it really made me think. i really like your choice of words and the emotions woven into your poetry. i'm off to read more of your work.
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by black_heart_emo_girl (3-3-2005 - 07:28 PM)
| that is really amazing hun.
I am in love with your poems.
The way everything you describe
I have been through, or felt
like at some point in my life.
*big emo hug* lucy |
by Deathcrush (3-3-2005 - 10:34 PM)
| i agree, your weave masterpieces and lik 20 a fucken day your amazeing noone i have ever met has skill as you do |
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