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Hunting Shadows(comment plz)
written by darkness_follows_me05:33 PM 3/3/05I thought I could remember
a dream in which we chased
shallow imitations of each other,
afraid to say "wait," and discover
your mockup ambled a touch too loosely-
you never told me I strut so stiffly-
what have I said in my sleep?
If you would have dropped hunting shadows
of me, perhaps, I thought,
when I awoke, my languid fingers
would have smoothed your shivers alive,
and my knee would, before parting
your petal-thighs, linger in the moist cross
where each springy lobe of rear curls
to where your heat evolves into passion.
Instead I ran aground on reality
with a sickening lurch: the dream
I remembered, I had lived, awake,
and so, that night, your thighs would part
so only in dreams. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by weeping_violet (3-3-2005 - 06:39 PM)
| Some well used words, i like it a lot. :) |
by Deathcrush (3-3-2005 - 10:30 PM)
| your stuff is getting better and better each time i read it! |
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