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Chained To Pain(please comment)
written by darkness_follows_me05:58 PM 3/3/05These thoughts feeding on my soul
gnawing away till bleeding and sore
raping my mind with bitter hate
till I can't take anymore.
Starving for delectable feasts
never letting up on the pain
devouring sanity with rabid frenzy
no strength to exorcise this demon away
Crimson screams echoing empty chambers
crying for salvation never found
within this torture of humanity
no escape from chains keeping me bound. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont think i put as much effort in that i should of...i dont think its that good,but plz comment anyway!:)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blackie-hawk (3-3-2005 - 06:07 PM)
| Really really good work (like all of your other poems i've read. Hmm, I specially like the last part of it :) . |
by Deathcrush (3-3-2005 - 10:25 PM)
| great, i like it alot i still cannot believe you have such good use of words |
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