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» Poem: Giving In
Giving In
written by Tainted_Soul_777
01:01 AM 3/4/05
Tell me that it will make you happy and Ill do it
You take as much atvantage of me as you can and I wish I knew it------
Before Hand I wish I could see
All the effects this would have on me
If it will let you down if I dont do it then Ill will
Ive already crossed every ocean and concored so many hills
I dont know why I try so hard
Ive looked for you so many times....but I just dont know where you are
Ive never really known my own happiness
I think....
Untill now
And if theres and more oceans or hills, I'll succeed somehow
I complain about being stepped on, and people taking atvantage
But for you I'll do things that I never thought I could manage.
Cause when Im with you I feel like Im living again
So untill Im gone, here no more I will always easily be giving in


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I love you Cameron

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by Cut_Wrist_Risk (3-5-2005 - 08:07 AM)
kalie u need to get-it-on! ooo yes!-Cass

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