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"Fuck Off" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX01:49 AM 3/4/05I want to die,
over and over I have tried.
I stab myself through the chest,
hoping this will put me to rest.
Ive hated everything bout me,
why cant you see.
I did this all because of you,
why the fuck werent you ever there.
I wanted somone to love,
somone that cared about me.
I want to suceede,
and from you I want to be freed. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XsouredXfaithX (3-4-2005 - 01:52 AM)
| not to sound weird but try a gun..people kill themselves that way with just one pull of the hand...good poem btw |
by Marigold (3-4-2005 - 01:57 AM)
| I feel like that. But don't kill yourself. I'll give you a reason to live. u2u me if you want to know what it is. |
by cassie_otten (3-4-2005 - 02:03 AM)
| i like this. it shows true feelings and depicts them well. I can feel the emotion and relate to the feeling expressed here. |
by *BrokenDreams89* (3-4-2005 - 02:51 AM)
| i can relate....i really like it....keep writing |
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