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Trying To Live *please comment?*
written by mishy007712:18 PM 3/4/05Trying to grasp reality by the neck and strangle it
Trying to climb out of this bottomless, never ending pit
Trying to take your hand, so you can lift me out of this
Trying to hold you close, trying to recieve your soft kiss
Trying to take more then I can ever hope to give back
But all these life-filled, loving, qualities I seem to lack
I can't hold on much longer now, soon I will break fast
I just hope these horrible feelings will not always last |
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Umm, just another poem. lol. PLEASE COMMENT
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| » Comments / Feedback | by brighteyes1357911 (3-4-2005 - 12:35 PM)
| i like this poem its got a lot of feeling to it good job ! |
by darkness_follows_me (3-6-2005 - 01:38 PM)
| u are a very talented poet,well done |
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