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"The Night" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX
06:51 AM 3/5/05
The night I tried to kill myself
You came into my room and wept
For me. The beauty of your longing
Held me like a plaintive song.
You came into my room and wept,
Suffering my suffering,
And held me like a plaintive song
Till I myself became your sun.

Suffering my suffering,
You taught me well the source of pain
Till I myself became your sun
Shining on the world back home.

You taught me well the source of pain:
For me, the beauty of your longing,
Shining on the world back home
The night I tried to kill myself.


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by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-5-2005 - 07:20 AM)
Great work... I loved it.

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