» Poem: "The Night" (please comment) |
"The Night" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX06:51 AM 3/5/05The night I tried to kill myself
You came into my room and wept
For me. The beauty of your longing
Held me like a plaintive song.
You came into my room and wept,
Suffering my suffering,
And held me like a plaintive song
Till I myself became your sun.
Suffering my suffering,
You taught me well the source of pain
Till I myself became your sun
Shining on the world back home.
You taught me well the source of pain:
For me, the beauty of your longing,
Shining on the world back home
The night I tried to kill myself. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-5-2005 - 07:20 AM)
Great work... I loved it. |
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