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You left me *please comment*
written by mishy007707:47 AM 3/5/05You left me here, now I will cry
You left me feeling like I want to die
You're not here to hold me again
You're not here to ride me of this pain
No more looking into your eyes
When you left, you took me by surprise
We were as close as we could be
Why the hell did you leave me?
Now I use a knife to my arm
I'm doing myself bodily harm
Trying to breathe in this life
Trying to let go of this knife
Why leave without a goodbye?
Why leave me here just to cry?
Bye Chong, I will always love you
For you there was nothing I wouldn't do |
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PLEASE COMMENT?Just a lil thing I made this morning when I was feelin a bit down. PLEASE COMMENT?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-5-2005 - 07:54 AM)
| Your feelings poured out through this poem. Very effective. Hope you feel better. |
by hurt_saralee (3-5-2005 - 09:44 AM)
| your poem is very good, the reader can really see how you are feeling, awesome job! |
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