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» Poem: To Mom
To Mom
written by lost_and_forgotten
02:53 AM 4/29/04
I thought you were my friend
I thought you really cared
I thought you treasured me
A love i thought we shared

But you yelled at me
So harsh I started to cry
Our bond, it broke so jagidly
I guess that was goodbye

I always try my hardest
In everything I do
I always do my best
But that's not good enough for you

So I just want to say
If you look into my heart
You'll see that everything I do
Isn't just a part

I thougt that you were there for me
To help me with my troubles
But now I see that you're not there
And so the tough time doubles

I thought that you were special
My struggle's been so long
But now I look into your heart
And see that I was wrong

12 long years have slowly gone by
And now i finally see
I'm just not good enough for you mom
When you are just fine for me


a poem by ~*~Kirsten*Ashley~*~


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» Comments / Feedback
by CrackMonkey1212 (5-23-2004 - 12:25 AM)
wow this is a great poem and i dont know y any body has never responded to it be4 i love it it reaminds me of me and my mom

by Akusume (5-30-2004 - 04:27 PM)
i cant relate, but i think all of ur poems are good

by lost_and_forgotten (9-19-2004 - 03:46 PM)
why thank you very much

by (anonymous) (11-2-2004 - 06:05 PM)
hey my name is misty and i jus got through readin ur poems and i wonted to tell u if u eva need a friend to talk to im here cuz it seems like u have a lot of promblems my email adress is chingys_gurl_0518@yahoo.com

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