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» Poem: When I Am Free (please comment)
When I Am Free (please comment)
written by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx
02:10 AM 3/6/05
People hold me back
I see neither reason nor logic to their actions
An unseen prejudice they possess
I need you to help me through
As I cower in my own inability to comprehend why life is the way it is
I need you to help me get started again
I am too tired to get back up
Seems these scars are all I have left
To show my experiences
People don't see me for me
And many won't
Fo now tears are falling from above
So release me from your test and let me join you
Release me from this pain and sorrow
Forever


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 03:54 AM)
kick ass poem

by speiamcial (3-6-2005 - 04:40 AM)
wow.

by sheding_bloody_tears (3-7-2005 - 10:08 PM)
it was good and umm....i dont know the word lol

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