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» Poem: "Never a Family" (please comment)
"Never a Family" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX
03:00 AM 3/6/05
I go to sleep,
wishing for you to tuck me in.
I wake up,
wishing for you to say good morning.
But all I get is nothing.
Its like I dont even know you,
Its like your a stranger to me.
A big tree,
standing next to a small weed.
Nothing but sadness,
nothing but hate.
Anything but love,
anything but a caring dad.
In my heart I have nothing,
but in my soul, I love you.
In you, you disown me,
saying I was never part of your family.
Thinking those words in my head,
thinking those words makes me want to be dead.
Having nothing to remember you by,
and wishing I'd never meet you.
If it wasnt for that,
I would be depressed.
You have fucked up my life,
you have hurt me bad.
Going to sleep,
wish for you to tuck me in,
Waking up,
wishing for you to be the first one to say good morning.
And all thats running through my head is,
I was never apart of your family.


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» Comments / Feedback
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-6-2005 - 03:19 AM)
It's sad but beautiful.

by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 03:21 AM)
omg i rele like this... its like totally like me n my fathers relationship ... so yeh i rele like it alot .. good job

by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 03:58 AM)
i really liked it it reminds me of my family always arguing never saying a word to me bcuz im the black sheep and they made me this way

by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 04:04 AM)
Perhaps your dad has failed you, but he is only your earthly father. He's human like all of us. That gives him no excuse, but remember this: God is your heavenly Father. He will NEVER leave you or betray you. He will ALWAYS love you very very much.

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