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» Poem: The Soldier(plz comment)
The Soldier(plz comment)
written by darkness_follows_me
05:26 PM 3/6/05
Light is the day, black is the night
Mists roll over field and stone
Loons crying their mournful songs
To the cold moon.

A lone figure moves through the fog
Who is he? A young soldier
Ages gone from this world
He knows no life.

Silent footfalls part the gray blanket
Of grounded cloud, carrying the shadow
The echo, the frostbitten light
He walks alone forevermore.

Death he knows, Death he has seen
Family and friend lost to it
To leave always, not to join him
Grief binds him to this world


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» Comments / Feedback
by slipknotty_gurl01 (3-6-2005 - 05:34 PM)
i like ur poem it reminds me of all the shit in my life for some weird reason but i think it kicksass!!!!!!!!

by (guest) (3-7-2005 - 08:14 PM)
This reminds me a lot of the things that I have gone through in my life...I can relate to it a lot....keep up the good work...your excellent at writing...:)

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