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"No Family" (please comment)
written by XxXstitchesXxX11:19 PM 3/6/05Alone in a dark, cold room,
sits a little gurl.
She sits a dusty floor,
thinking of her past more and more.
Having lost her family,
knowing there she will never be free.
Remembering those who loved and cared,
remembering the happiness they shared.
Still hearing the words in head,
that she wasnt his daughter is what he said.
Seeing her mom happy as ever,
sharing her warm love with her boyfriend.
Her brothers she doesnt see,
they live with her dad, where she will never be.
Being lost in a big world,
not knowing what to do.
In a dark, cold room,
sits a lonley gurl with no family. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by toya (3-6-2005 - 11:26 PM)
| Hey that poem was good but u really need a little more work, I know u r probably saying or thinking how would she know well I do if u go to poetry.com u will see that I know I have entered in that poem and got alot of offers to go to disney world to get gifts for my poems well thats all but if u want to chat or e-mail me back and be my friend e-mail me at toya1989@scbglobal.net |
by whoababyyourehawt (3-7-2005 - 12:22 AM)
| thats REALLY good i like it! |
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